The Wish to Be Young by Jole1038

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Another two-part unbirth story by Jole1038 on DeviantArt. This one follows Mandy, an 80-year-old woman wishing to be young again. Nothing happens, of course, but during the night she actually begins to get younger. Except this reversal has some consequences for her family members. This one gets a bit dark.

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Mandy was 80 years old and she was celebrating her birthday. She had her whole family around her. All but her husband Max who died at 70. He used to work as a security guard on the graveyard shift. (10pm to 8am or through the night)

They all gathered around her to celebrate her birthday in her home. The house wasn’t perfect or in great shape but it still looked ok. Mandy was happy to be with her family but hated being old. She couldn’t do anything by herself. Her body was weak but she still had a strong mind.

During the party they brought out the photo album and looked at all the old photos. We saw Zara holding baby Julie next to the scare on her belly. This was made from the cesarean during her birth. How when June was pregnant with Joel near the end she was huge. This was due to him being a big baby...

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